loklokfafa's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Run]

Love the polyrhythms, however would like more bass, melody, and variety.

Gougou responds:

Ok I will try

[Error Glitch (160BPM)]

Sounds great! I would love for some melody though, because if you just keep repeating a section of music over and over again it starts to get boring. I understand this is in the dub/drumstep genre but improvements can be made. Overall great job!

NoteBreaker responds:

Thanks! I do sometimes feel like my songs are a bit repetitive and not so great but after you finish a good part you just get lazy to finish the whole song. xD

[Alone with me]

This song is mostly on one level of excitement. The melody basically doesn't change, and it's the same with the key. I understand that the drum line is constantly changing, but it doesn't add as much interest as changing the actual melodic line.

ShareeBon responds:

Oh well!

[2D Space Saloon]

Sounds great! The only objection I would make is for you to use some quantization. It would really help balance some of the rhythms out. Other than that, its good! :)

LagomyDrago responds:

Not going to lie to you - I am still fairly young and dumb when it comes to the precision and nuances of musical tuning. I spent about an hour just reading up on quantization, and had no idea such a feature even existed. Thank you, very much! I will definitely play around with that. I do like to preserve the odd idiosyncratic melodies that are rife in hand-played songs, but certainly my production quality could stand to see huge rooms in improvement in terms of beat consistency.

[Geoplex - Resplendent]

Really nice! However, one main complaint I have is that the constant arpeggiation of the bell synth is kind of annoying (sometimes). Other than that, I love it!

Geoplex responds:

Actually yeah I used those a lot. I think that's pretty fair lmao